My dear Writer at heart, 

Thanks for the acknowledgements and look forward more blogs from your desk,

Subbu

subbuji
i loved the way u tackled both pics in yr unique way
enjoyed commitment a lot
bina

Love is very essential for a congenial living.While the respect to elders is a must from youngsters , it is the responsibility of the elders to guide the youngsters for proper growth.While they may have high expectations from youngsters they must give them freedom of thoughts, words and deeds so as to achieve their cherished goal.Parents must develop their children to be the future pillars of our society.The nation is bound to be prosperous with better human resourses.
Subbu ,I could gather these thoughts from your spirited poem.

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! Take to the contest Subbu ji.. and this is really beautiful, touching write..

Dear Subbuji,
Both the poems are filled with wonderful messages. I liked the way you concluded..

World belongs to us with so much to offer and share,
Let's build those confidence in the name of pure bondage of commitments
to self, society and to the nation
with all those key words of integrity, faith, freedom, honour and commitments.

Wonderful message to mankind. I like your poems a lot!

Cheers and Regards
Meera

pure...........a pure ecastically superb poem..........loved the words which convey a lot  to realize and act........you have definitely presented a more sincere side of the commitment. ....enjoyed

Beautiful Poems Subbu Sir.

The first poem,

Children’s of Today are the future leaders of tomorrow
Just teach us the laws of Life
We promise that we play and study with priorities

They know exactly what to do. They are really smart.We should allow them to grow naturally giving them freedom, helping them to achieve their goal rather than imposing our ideas into them.

The second poem.

Loved it. It has beautiful indepth meaning. .

All the best Sir.

MayaAnil

SUBBU BHAI,

THANKS VERY MUCH FOR YOUR LOVELY ENTRY . TAKE CARE. GOD BLESS YOU.

Thanks our dear Obulance for the kind observations and feedbacks.
You are right that our present day kids are smart and know their ambitions.
It is the proper guidance and monitering by us enables them to prosper.
Never Ever impose one's ideas on the other without any reasoning and feedbacks is the lesson all we learnt.

Thanks for the kind visits too...

Subbu

PFji,  

Let be there a freedom of thoughts
and never a thrusting burden on us

Children are more matured than adults; now days they tell us what to do, but if we as parents give them freedom they would never misuse, if we restrict and curb them then it becomes difficult. Beautiful and inspiring write!